(____ and ______ )Show and Not Tell

The music was a melody of magic. It was captivating,marvelous,excellent!
 Like a fairytale come through. It flowed around the room to everyone, and they just opened their mouths wide. It was as calm as a lullaby, but also touching at the same time, the air was filled with emotions. She had just enchanted the crowd. Some even took out their handkerchiefs to wipe their tears.When she stopped, they did not clap, they did not applaud. They only stood up and bowed. It was a standing ovation.  

1 Response to "(____ and ______ )Show and Not Tell"

  1. lis Says:

    Good description of the scene in the room and good showing of the actions. Keep it up! Just remember: American English and British English.

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